I really like getting to experience your train of thought while writing this piece.
I also want to note that it kind of seems like a case of art imitating real life. The script itself has all of these people rushing in and making changes to make the shot of Jake feel more genuine - and similar but different but you have a bunch of people giving you feedback about how to make this script more easily understood by them, but I like that you have the authenticity to keep it the way you intend, which is most genuine.
Thanks for this comment, Noah :) Yeah, the more we share the work we're thinking about the more people look out for us, both directly by perhaps saying, "hey, I want to be involved in that" and indirectly by saying, "Yeah, I hear Jesse is directing a short and thinking more about that," which has a lot of positive ripple effects—both socially and emotionally.
I really like getting to experience your train of thought while writing this piece.
I also want to note that it kind of seems like a case of art imitating real life. The script itself has all of these people rushing in and making changes to make the shot of Jake feel more genuine - and similar but different but you have a bunch of people giving you feedback about how to make this script more easily understood by them, but I like that you have the authenticity to keep it the way you intend, which is most genuine.
Thanks for this comment, Noah :) Yeah, the more we share the work we're thinking about the more people look out for us, both directly by perhaps saying, "hey, I want to be involved in that" and indirectly by saying, "Yeah, I hear Jesse is directing a short and thinking more about that," which has a lot of positive ripple effects—both socially and emotionally.